Post by Naoko Ebisawa on Oct 12, 2017 2:33:50 GMT
Character Name: Naoko Ebisawa
Link to Character: customnaruto.proboards.com/thread/2322/ebisawa-naoko-wip?page=1&scrollTo=6881
Bijuu: Yonbi (Four Tails)
Jinchuuriki Abilities:
Forms:
Each transformation is a buff to her physical state. The more tails she grows, the more powerful she becomes. On the contrary, this drives Naoko further into a more animalistic and violent state. When she reached three tails, she only becomes partly aware of what's going on and her actions. The first cloak is made up of the four tailed beast's chakra. The beast's chakra will tend to be harmful: individuals near Naoko will experience a slight physical discomfort; those who come into contact with the shroud will suffer a painful burn wherever they touch it; Naoko herself would suffer an increasing amount of corrosion to their body that can eventually damage body parts beyond the point of use.
Mastery: Naoko has been a jinchuuriki since she was a child (around three maybe) but has yet to fully master her all forms. The strongest form she's ever been able to achieve was past her initial transformation and into her first cloak with three tails. She has been able to obtain each form, however she has yet to master them. Since she has no control of her forms, often she's blinded into rage and becomes animal-like and violent. With her third tail in her first cloak, she becomes somewhat conscious as to what she's doing, but the tailed beast would still have control over her.
RP Sample: A punch landed onto Naoko's left cheek as she was sent flying across the fields. She began to taste blood running in her mouth and all over tongue, experiencing the taste iron that splattered on her tongue. She even felt a few teeth being knocked out in the process. Naoko struggled to get up as she shook in the process. The little girl spat out the pool of blood that was entrapped in her mouth while she continued to bleed. Bruises were all over Naoko, purple and blue. Her mouth leaked blood, pain surged everywhere on the surface of her body. To think that her father would go easy on a child during their trainings was more than just an understatement.
"Damn it, Naoko!" Raidon would yell from the distance as he watched her poor daughter shaking her way to get back on her two feet. Just when Naoko was barely standing correctly, the man charged at the girl and grabbed her by the hair and picked her up with one hand. "No matter how much we train, no matter how many times I told you to train harder, you're still giving me lackluster results!" He yelled.
Naoko winced in pain as she felt Raidon's grip tighten in her hair. "B-But..." She struggled to only utter the word out of her mouth as she coughed up blood which splattered on the Tsuchikage's outfit. "F-Fah.... F-Fath..." Her voice was hoarse as she tried to talk, but only failure was a result.
"But nothing!" Her father yelled as he interrupted his daughter's struggling words. "You will bleed until you get stronger, you will cry until you feel tolerance to pain, and we will keep training until you live up to the Ebisawa name!" He roared at Naoko. Drawing back his fist, Raidon launched it right into the girl's face. This sent her flying back once again as her nose released an explosion of blood that dripped all over her face while rolling all over the dirt. "Come on, Naoko! Get up!" He barked.
Naoko can feel tears starting to flood her eyes before rolling down her cheeks as she tried to get up again. No father would dare try to push a small child over the limitations set up for them. Rage slowly began to rise as she can hear her father continuing to bark at her to get up. She clenched her fists as she tried to get up. That's when a shroud of red, bubble chakra began to swarm around Naoko, as if she were being engulfed into it. Her canine fangs began to resemble the four tailed beast's own, except they were sharper. Her eyes went yellow, just like the tailed beast as well.
Raidon was at shock as he noticed Naoko's transformation. "Naoko!" He yelled in determination to save his daughter. As he ran towards Naoko, she shot a glance at the man as she released a powerful roar that was strong enough to knock the Tsuchikage back. Her bruises began to heal, alongside her bleeding coming to a complete stop. Getting up on her feet as if nothing happened, she began to beat her chest with her fists as if she were an ape while creating an aggressive and forcing yell.
And that was one she began to tick into her initial transformation.
History:
"Luck... they say that some people are born into it while others suffer to achieve it. I, on the other hand, have suffered. Though, it had never been on my side ever since."
Naoko is the daughter of the now deceased Shodaime Tsuchikage, Raidon Ebisawa. The man, hell, no word could be used to describe such ignorance and pride that ran around inside of him. It was enough for him to meet his own grave, but not enough for his village to protect him nor have the ability to protect himself from an assassination attempted from low-classed assassins. To her, coming from a minor village, they were considered low-classed. It was a shame that she was forced to be born with a father who only cared about power and control. Naoko only wished that she wouldn't go through the same faith as her father.
Her father wasn't exactly a fool for mightiness until he became the very first Tsuchikage, so she heard from other people who knew her father long before she was born. What went wrong? Why did his pride take the best of him? It was clear to understand that Raidon was under pressure, as the Tsuchikage. He needed to protect his image as a strong leader; a leader who wasn't hesitant with his actions and confident in his decisions. He did show no hesitation and displayed a lot of confidence, but to say that his decisions were smart was an understatement.
Raidon was either loved or hated. There were only just a handful of people who felt both emotions for the man, but it was always either or. He nearly lead the entire village to a Great Depression once, but was able to construct one of the most finest armies within the shinobi world. Unfortunately, that was before he attempted to destroy the economy. To many people's surprise, he was still able to keep his position as kage. Raidon was seen as a great leader to many despite his flaws, but mistook dictatorship as strong and stable leadership. They were damned, but also, in her father's words, "lucky to be blessed with such a leader".
Just about three years after the birth of Naoko, the four tailed beast was captured as it was spotted near the village and was enslaved right after. Unfortunately, it was able to break free from its detainment and cause mayhem all over the village. Near the fall of Iwagakure, Raidon made a drastic decision: using his only child as a sacrifice to seal the beast into her. It was the only way to save the village. In his eyes, Raidon wouldn't want any other child to face the burden of having a tailed beast sealed inside of them but his own. It was the only way.
And so Naoko's "bad luck" has begun.
Naoko has been teased and ridiculed when she attended the academy. "Monkey", "Monster", telling her she would end up like her father one day when she would become Tsuchikage. This, of course, affected her self-esteem and her performance within the academy. She became a loner and tuned herself away from the public. She felt hated; no one wanted to be friends with her, let alone talk to her. Naoko didn't wanted to tell her father any of this. If she were to tell him what happened, this would give her more negative light to shine on.
A few days before she would graduate from the academy, Naoko snapped. It was rage that she never felt before, but was meant to felt. The incident happened when she was training with her father in the rocky plains. Raidon was pushing Naoko to her limit as he noticed a decrease in her performance. He was well aware of how she was treated in the academy and thought to use it as an advantage to push his daughter over the edge. The next thing she knew, Naoko broke.
A shroud of red chakra formed all around her as her eyes went yellow. Her canine fangs grew just a few centimeters longer, however it did resemble the four tailed beast's own with the exception that it became more sharper, and just a slight increase in muscle. Naoko immediately went in for a kill at her father when she finished her transformation. To Raidon's surprise she was extremely strong, but not strong enough to fully take him down.
That was the day Naoko somehow managed to tap into her initial transformation. It was a day she refused to talk about, nor wanted to try and understood what happened. She only wished it never happened again.
Naoko made friends on her team when she graduated from the academy. Other than that, that was it. Those were her only two friends. She acknowledged their existence, but refused to talk to them other than doing missions. It's not that she hated them, but Naoko formed a habit of avoiding people. She did eventually learn how to open up to her sensei and her teammates. They were like family, the family that Naoko always wished she had. Or at least, a better father suited to be the Tsuchikage. Naoko was able to pass the chunin exams at ease. With her team, she was able to regain her confidence and strength to become a shinobi.
Naoko was on a mission with two of her teammates and a jonin for supervision. They were on a mission to deliver something outside of the village, and that was when the group was ambushed by four B-Rank missing-nin interfering their mission. Unfortunately, one teammate managed to die in the process right in front of Naoko's eyes. Unconsciously, she began to tap into her initial transformation and lunged at the ninja who murdered her teammate in cold blood. This time, she managed to grow one tail within the process. The fight went on for a few short hours. One of the B-Rank missing-nin were killed off by Naoko, but the three remaining shinobi were still alive. Two of them ganged up on her while the jonin and her other teammate ganged up on on the other shinobi. Eventually, Naoko and her team won, but unfortunately had lost one teammate in the process.
Naoko received her second tail when she was a jonin. She was placed in a similar situation when she was in her chunin year. She lost one of her students in an ambush. All of her transformations were based off of emotional triggers; rage, despair, and death of others, all while she had no control of herself and her actions. She wanted to understand why she had no control over her transformations. She wanted to communicate with the beast within her. Naoko wanted to understand the beast itself. However, her attempts were weak and was unable to get in touch of the four tailed beast.
Naoko received her third tail in her first cloak while she was getting ridiculed by her own team members within the ANBU. She remembered just a small group of them constantly harassing her about her father and her being the host of the four tails. The same insults she heard from when she was an academy student came back. And it didn't just stop from her team members. Almost the whole village ridiculed her for being unable to control her temper. Some of them were even scared of her. Naoko remembered growing a third tail in her first cloak and nearly caused destruction throughout the village. Rage took over her. She wanted to kill those who look down and her and her hardships. There were no limitations, no morality, nothing. Luckily enough, her father arrived to control Naoko and the situation.
Just a year later after the incident, Naoko's father was murdered by an assassin from Kusagakure. The majority of the nation took their anger and blame onto Konohagakure for the assassination and want to extract revenge from not only Kusagakure for the murder, but also Konohagakure. There, Naoko was promoted as the Nidaime Tsuchikage much from her father's wishes. Now it's up to her to lead Iwagakure to the right path. Naoko, in all honesty, didn't want to go into war with the two villages. Her father may have been murdered, but that didn't mean Naoko wanted him alive.
Naoko can only wish war doesn't break out, but if it were to do so, then she must prepare herself and her village for the impact.
Link to Character: customnaruto.proboards.com/thread/2322/ebisawa-naoko-wip?page=1&scrollTo=6881
Bijuu: Yonbi (Four Tails)
Jinchuuriki Abilities:
- Access to Lava Release
- Enormous supply of chakra
- Heightened Senses
- Immense increase in physical attributes
- Increases power of taijutsu-based jutsu by one rank
- Decreases damage taken from katon jutsu damage by one rank due to Lava Release
- Increase in katon jutsu damage by one rank
- Can create shockwaves through roars and punches
Forms:
- Initial Transformation
- First Cloak (One-tail)
- First Cloak (Two-tails)
- First Cloak (Three-tails)
Each transformation is a buff to her physical state. The more tails she grows, the more powerful she becomes. On the contrary, this drives Naoko further into a more animalistic and violent state. When she reached three tails, she only becomes partly aware of what's going on and her actions. The first cloak is made up of the four tailed beast's chakra. The beast's chakra will tend to be harmful: individuals near Naoko will experience a slight physical discomfort; those who come into contact with the shroud will suffer a painful burn wherever they touch it; Naoko herself would suffer an increasing amount of corrosion to their body that can eventually damage body parts beyond the point of use.
Mastery: Naoko has been a jinchuuriki since she was a child (around three maybe) but has yet to fully master her all forms. The strongest form she's ever been able to achieve was past her initial transformation and into her first cloak with three tails. She has been able to obtain each form, however she has yet to master them. Since she has no control of her forms, often she's blinded into rage and becomes animal-like and violent. With her third tail in her first cloak, she becomes somewhat conscious as to what she's doing, but the tailed beast would still have control over her.
RP Sample: A punch landed onto Naoko's left cheek as she was sent flying across the fields. She began to taste blood running in her mouth and all over tongue, experiencing the taste iron that splattered on her tongue. She even felt a few teeth being knocked out in the process. Naoko struggled to get up as she shook in the process. The little girl spat out the pool of blood that was entrapped in her mouth while she continued to bleed. Bruises were all over Naoko, purple and blue. Her mouth leaked blood, pain surged everywhere on the surface of her body. To think that her father would go easy on a child during their trainings was more than just an understatement.
"Damn it, Naoko!" Raidon would yell from the distance as he watched her poor daughter shaking her way to get back on her two feet. Just when Naoko was barely standing correctly, the man charged at the girl and grabbed her by the hair and picked her up with one hand. "No matter how much we train, no matter how many times I told you to train harder, you're still giving me lackluster results!" He yelled.
Naoko winced in pain as she felt Raidon's grip tighten in her hair. "B-But..." She struggled to only utter the word out of her mouth as she coughed up blood which splattered on the Tsuchikage's outfit. "F-Fah.... F-Fath..." Her voice was hoarse as she tried to talk, but only failure was a result.
"But nothing!" Her father yelled as he interrupted his daughter's struggling words. "You will bleed until you get stronger, you will cry until you feel tolerance to pain, and we will keep training until you live up to the Ebisawa name!" He roared at Naoko. Drawing back his fist, Raidon launched it right into the girl's face. This sent her flying back once again as her nose released an explosion of blood that dripped all over her face while rolling all over the dirt. "Come on, Naoko! Get up!" He barked.
Naoko can feel tears starting to flood her eyes before rolling down her cheeks as she tried to get up again. No father would dare try to push a small child over the limitations set up for them. Rage slowly began to rise as she can hear her father continuing to bark at her to get up. She clenched her fists as she tried to get up. That's when a shroud of red, bubble chakra began to swarm around Naoko, as if she were being engulfed into it. Her canine fangs began to resemble the four tailed beast's own, except they were sharper. Her eyes went yellow, just like the tailed beast as well.
Raidon was at shock as he noticed Naoko's transformation. "Naoko!" He yelled in determination to save his daughter. As he ran towards Naoko, she shot a glance at the man as she released a powerful roar that was strong enough to knock the Tsuchikage back. Her bruises began to heal, alongside her bleeding coming to a complete stop. Getting up on her feet as if nothing happened, she began to beat her chest with her fists as if she were an ape while creating an aggressive and forcing yell.
And that was one she began to tick into her initial transformation.
History:
"Luck... they say that some people are born into it while others suffer to achieve it. I, on the other hand, have suffered. Though, it had never been on my side ever since."
Naoko is the daughter of the now deceased Shodaime Tsuchikage, Raidon Ebisawa. The man, hell, no word could be used to describe such ignorance and pride that ran around inside of him. It was enough for him to meet his own grave, but not enough for his village to protect him nor have the ability to protect himself from an assassination attempted from low-classed assassins. To her, coming from a minor village, they were considered low-classed. It was a shame that she was forced to be born with a father who only cared about power and control. Naoko only wished that she wouldn't go through the same faith as her father.
Her father wasn't exactly a fool for mightiness until he became the very first Tsuchikage, so she heard from other people who knew her father long before she was born. What went wrong? Why did his pride take the best of him? It was clear to understand that Raidon was under pressure, as the Tsuchikage. He needed to protect his image as a strong leader; a leader who wasn't hesitant with his actions and confident in his decisions. He did show no hesitation and displayed a lot of confidence, but to say that his decisions were smart was an understatement.
Raidon was either loved or hated. There were only just a handful of people who felt both emotions for the man, but it was always either or. He nearly lead the entire village to a Great Depression once, but was able to construct one of the most finest armies within the shinobi world. Unfortunately, that was before he attempted to destroy the economy. To many people's surprise, he was still able to keep his position as kage. Raidon was seen as a great leader to many despite his flaws, but mistook dictatorship as strong and stable leadership. They were damned, but also, in her father's words, "lucky to be blessed with such a leader".
Just about three years after the birth of Naoko, the four tailed beast was captured as it was spotted near the village and was enslaved right after. Unfortunately, it was able to break free from its detainment and cause mayhem all over the village. Near the fall of Iwagakure, Raidon made a drastic decision: using his only child as a sacrifice to seal the beast into her. It was the only way to save the village. In his eyes, Raidon wouldn't want any other child to face the burden of having a tailed beast sealed inside of them but his own. It was the only way.
And so Naoko's "bad luck" has begun.
Naoko has been teased and ridiculed when she attended the academy. "Monkey", "Monster", telling her she would end up like her father one day when she would become Tsuchikage. This, of course, affected her self-esteem and her performance within the academy. She became a loner and tuned herself away from the public. She felt hated; no one wanted to be friends with her, let alone talk to her. Naoko didn't wanted to tell her father any of this. If she were to tell him what happened, this would give her more negative light to shine on.
A few days before she would graduate from the academy, Naoko snapped. It was rage that she never felt before, but was meant to felt. The incident happened when she was training with her father in the rocky plains. Raidon was pushing Naoko to her limit as he noticed a decrease in her performance. He was well aware of how she was treated in the academy and thought to use it as an advantage to push his daughter over the edge. The next thing she knew, Naoko broke.
A shroud of red chakra formed all around her as her eyes went yellow. Her canine fangs grew just a few centimeters longer, however it did resemble the four tailed beast's own with the exception that it became more sharper, and just a slight increase in muscle. Naoko immediately went in for a kill at her father when she finished her transformation. To Raidon's surprise she was extremely strong, but not strong enough to fully take him down.
That was the day Naoko somehow managed to tap into her initial transformation. It was a day she refused to talk about, nor wanted to try and understood what happened. She only wished it never happened again.
Naoko made friends on her team when she graduated from the academy. Other than that, that was it. Those were her only two friends. She acknowledged their existence, but refused to talk to them other than doing missions. It's not that she hated them, but Naoko formed a habit of avoiding people. She did eventually learn how to open up to her sensei and her teammates. They were like family, the family that Naoko always wished she had. Or at least, a better father suited to be the Tsuchikage. Naoko was able to pass the chunin exams at ease. With her team, she was able to regain her confidence and strength to become a shinobi.
Naoko was on a mission with two of her teammates and a jonin for supervision. They were on a mission to deliver something outside of the village, and that was when the group was ambushed by four B-Rank missing-nin interfering their mission. Unfortunately, one teammate managed to die in the process right in front of Naoko's eyes. Unconsciously, she began to tap into her initial transformation and lunged at the ninja who murdered her teammate in cold blood. This time, she managed to grow one tail within the process. The fight went on for a few short hours. One of the B-Rank missing-nin were killed off by Naoko, but the three remaining shinobi were still alive. Two of them ganged up on her while the jonin and her other teammate ganged up on on the other shinobi. Eventually, Naoko and her team won, but unfortunately had lost one teammate in the process.
Naoko received her second tail when she was a jonin. She was placed in a similar situation when she was in her chunin year. She lost one of her students in an ambush. All of her transformations were based off of emotional triggers; rage, despair, and death of others, all while she had no control of herself and her actions. She wanted to understand why she had no control over her transformations. She wanted to communicate with the beast within her. Naoko wanted to understand the beast itself. However, her attempts were weak and was unable to get in touch of the four tailed beast.
Naoko received her third tail in her first cloak while she was getting ridiculed by her own team members within the ANBU. She remembered just a small group of them constantly harassing her about her father and her being the host of the four tails. The same insults she heard from when she was an academy student came back. And it didn't just stop from her team members. Almost the whole village ridiculed her for being unable to control her temper. Some of them were even scared of her. Naoko remembered growing a third tail in her first cloak and nearly caused destruction throughout the village. Rage took over her. She wanted to kill those who look down and her and her hardships. There were no limitations, no morality, nothing. Luckily enough, her father arrived to control Naoko and the situation.
Just a year later after the incident, Naoko's father was murdered by an assassin from Kusagakure. The majority of the nation took their anger and blame onto Konohagakure for the assassination and want to extract revenge from not only Kusagakure for the murder, but also Konohagakure. There, Naoko was promoted as the Nidaime Tsuchikage much from her father's wishes. Now it's up to her to lead Iwagakure to the right path. Naoko, in all honesty, didn't want to go into war with the two villages. Her father may have been murdered, but that didn't mean Naoko wanted him alive.
Naoko can only wish war doesn't break out, but if it were to do so, then she must prepare herself and her village for the impact.
