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Post by Mei on Nov 8, 2017 23:36:12 GMT
A quick few things about this first remove the mention for consuming other human beings. Next, in your sage transformation, you mention its sage mode while it is a type of sage mode it's not the correct term in this clan. Sage mode is the term used for training with an animal to obtain sage mode, for your clan Sage transformation is enough on its own so remove mention of sage mode or reword it. They also you chakra canons and blasts as for normal jutsu usage they use more chakra canon and taijutsu attacks more than actual jutsu and they wouldn't be able to say mix their elemental chakra with sage chakra because of having no control its more of a surge throughout there bodies type of power and they cannot control themselves in the process.
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Post by Jurojin Kyojin on Nov 9, 2017 15:57:06 GMT
As per requested removed 'Sage Mode' mention even though this came directly from the Naruto Wikipedia. Also the consuming of humans is for RP Flavor as confirmed by Key that it was ok. I am well aware how "Jugo" abilities worked, but whose to say each person is able to utilize it differently, which leaves it up to the creativity of the player to be uniquely different.
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Post by Mei on Nov 9, 2017 16:57:41 GMT
No, it's not how Jugo's abilities worked so this should be reflected within the clan they cannot really control there sage chakra so are not able to mix it with element chakra as that would require fine chakra control something a raging monster woundn't be able to do. So gonna say no to infusing the sage chakra like in normal sage mode as they don't have the control. This clan should also be canon and follow canon rules as in no changing how it works either. If you wanted to make a sage character I would recommend making an actual sage with an animal contract and being able to control their techniques as you want it seems. Also spoke to Key you deal with me with the review if you have a problem PM me and not another member of the staff. We have talked about the consuming human even if its Npc or not it doesn't say that currently and it could be used on ninja and could be considered god modding if used in certain ways so remove it for the sake of avoiding issues down the line.
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